
A beautiful translation, thank you! This song was the reason, why I came to LT. Although I definitely can't sing, I did it once in a small theatre nearby, my foot was trembling all the time, but the audience (Russian emigrants) was very kind...
By the way - Bulat Okudzhava (his father came from Georgia!) was once in my hometown at a book exhibition. My father met him, he was looking for penfriends, but I didn't know that he was in town and my father didn't know that I love him deeply. When I think about this, it really hurts.
Certainly not a perfect translation, but at least I didn't try to prettify the original...