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The Moods (Russian translation)

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The Moods

Time drops in decay,
Like a candle burnt out,
And the mountains and the woods
Have their day, have their day;
What one in the rout
Of the fire-born moods
Has fallen away?
 
Submitted by PinchusPinchus on Sat, 20/02/2021 - 23:12
Last edited by MichaelNaMichaelNa on Sat, 06/03/2021 - 15:39
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Song interpretation:

Russian translationRussian (metered, poetic, rhyming)
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Время канет в распад,
Как свеча, догорит,
А с горами леса
Всё стоят и стоят.
Что, с развалом
Огнём порождённых обид1,
Никогда не вернётся назад?
 
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).

© Irula 🌿

Submitted by IremiaIremia on Sun, 21/02/2021 - 16:41
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SchnurrbratSchnurrbrat    Sun, 21/02/2021 - 16:44

Not sure about this "канет в распад," phrase.

IremiaIremia    Sun, 21/02/2021 - 16:45

Скатится к распаду. Канет во что-то, исчезнет в распаде.

wisigothwisigoth    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 14:32
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Чтоб не канул текстик этот/
Без следов, в седую Лету! )

IremiaIremia    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 14:44

Вот спасибо!!! Не ожидала!!!!😁👏

wisigothwisigoth    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 15:39

Ждите,чего не ждут😉prepare for what's beyond imagination!)

IremiaIremia    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 15:50

Хороший совет! Лишь бы ничего неожиданное по кумполу не ударило 😉

wisigothwisigoth    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 15:58

Ал был мак, светил маяк,
Но, чудней всех, - Амаяк!

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 16:35

Lol, I was going to do this - for the originality that it deserves. Alas, I got into the riptide of emotions. And Irula is getting a PM because she has stellar objectivity.

IremiaIremia    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 16:44

Do what, Di? Hit me on the head? 🤣
And why “originality”? I understand this poem thus, and I don’t think my understanding is original, I just translated quite straightforwardly.

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 16:46

No...give the stars. Look, we were all original, minus my inability to rhyme... lol.

IremiaIremia    Mon, 22/02/2021 - 16:53

OK, OK, so far you haven’t even liked it 😜😘

IgeethecatIgeethecat    Sun, 28/02/2021 - 18:23
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Настроения не горят!

IremiaIremia    Sun, 28/02/2021 - 18:36

Спасибо, кися! 😘

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