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Autumn Dusk (Russian translation)

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Autumn Dusk

I saw above a sea of hills
A solitary planet shine,
And there was no one, near or far,
To keep the world from being mine.
 
Submitted by LobolyrixLobolyrix on Tue, 27/04/2021 - 16:50
Last edited by sandringsandring on Thu, 06/05/2021 - 18:05
Russian translationRussian (poetic)
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Осенний сумрак

Я видела над морем гор
Планету, что одна горит
И нет нигде и никого,
И мир лишь мне принадлежит
 
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Submitted by sandringsandring on Thu, 06/05/2021 - 17:45
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vevvevvevvev    Thu, 06/05/2021 - 18:01

В последней строчке оригинала ошибка. Должно быть "To keep the world from being mine"

sandringsandring    Thu, 06/05/2021 - 18:08

Да, я послушала исполнение. Сейчас источник найду to verify. Исправила

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