Alma Barroca
Sat, 18/03/2023 - 13:15
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فتان يا ليل فتان (Fattan Ya Leil Fattan) (English translation)
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فتان يا ليل فتان
الليلة ليلة غرام
تِرِقّ في الأنسام
بُص في عنيا وشوف
تِلقى في عنيا هيام
هيام بينادي موعوده،
غرام بيغني لوجوده (x4)
Submitted by 
hayolie on 2023-03-13
hayolie on 2023-03-13Last edited by 
líadan on 2023-03-18
líadan on 2023-03-18
English translationEnglish
Glamorous, Oh Night
Tonight is a night of Love
As it has a delicate breeze
Look into my eyes, you'll see
That adoration has filled them
Adoration that calls his promised lover
Adoration that sings for his lover's presence (4x)
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Submitted by 
Mohamed Zaki on 2023-03-18
Mohamed Zaki on 2023-03-18Added in reply to request by líadan
líadanLast edited by Mohamed Zaki on 2023-03-19
Mohamed Zaki on 2023-03-19Please help to translate "فتان يا ليل فتان"
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Comments
Alma Barroca
Sat, 18/03/2023 - 13:15
Mohamed Zaki
Sat, 18/03/2023 - 13:33
I had made it already, thanks for amending the song
líadan
Sat, 18/03/2023 - 21:05
Thank you the translation. Could you clarify a few parts?
As it have a delicate breeze → Is it: As delicate as [the/a] breeze // or is it: For there is a delicate breeze
Suggestion:
That adoration filled my eyes → that adoration has filled them (this implies that the eyes have been filled with adoration, instead of repeating 'eyes' twice in the same two lines).
Adoration that calling his promised lover → Adoration that calls his promised lover
Adoration that Singing for his lover being there → Adoration that sings for his lover's presence.
Mohamed Zaki
Sat, 18/03/2023 - 23:00
"As it have a delicate breeze" "It" refers here to the night "As The night have a delicate breeze"
The two other suggestions will be edited, thanks for mentioning my mistakes so I can correct them
líadan
Sun, 19/03/2023 - 00:01
Thank you for clarifying that. Just to reiterate: Tonight is a night of love, because it has a delicate breeze (since you're using "it" it has to be "has" - it's used for he/she/it. If you want to use "have" it has to be used with: I, you, we or they).
I made a translation to Spanish with the use of your English one, I hope you don't mind: https://lyricstranslate.com/en/fattan-ya-leil-fattan-encantadora-oh-noch...
Mohamed Zaki
Sun, 19/03/2023 - 13:17
Ok, Ellen, I had corrected it, and for the Spanish translation, no problem, It's a great pleasure for me to use my translations
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