Carlos Rivera - Que lo nuestro se quede nuestro (English translation)

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English translation

Let what is ours stay ours

Only you and I know the story,
because you and I wrote it.
And don't let anyone tell you something else ,
Because people who hate those who touch glory still exist..
 
Only you and I accepted the journey,
since we met..
Let the world come to judge the one who loves,
the one I needed,
and who has no choice but just be
one that was not expected ...
 
Breath slowly,
take back the time,
When I don't regret loving you
What we lived
was so sincere..
How much I loved you,
how much I love you..
how much I love you...
 
And to whom remains what we have built,
and what we destroyed?
Let that invisible and brave come
to erase your past..
To come and steal the warmth of the kisses
that my lips gave you..
To blur from your white bed sheets
the days and the nights
and then go buy a life...
 
And let the ours ,
stays as ours..
When I don't regret loving you
What we lived
was so sincere..
How much I loved you,
how much I love you..
how much I love you...
 
And let the ours ,
stays as ours..
When I don't regret loving you
What we lived
was so sincere..
How much I loved you,
how much I love you..
how much I love you..
how much I love you...
 
Submitted by san79 on Fri, 05/01/2018 - 10:54
Added in reply to request by Alicia Lopez
Last edited by san79 on Tue, 13/03/2018 - 06:24
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Que lo nuestro se quede nuestro

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P-Code    Mon, 12/03/2018 - 02:30

Some corrections:
Title → Let what is ours stay ours
cause you and I wrote it → because you and I wrote it
And don't let anyone say you anything else → And don't let anyone tell you something else ("anything" is fine, too)
cause still exists people that hate those who touch the glory → Because people who hate those who touch glory still exist
A quién necesitaba → The one I needed
Breat slowly → *breath
Que yo de amarte / No me arrepiento → When I don't regret loving you
to erease your past → *erase
To come and stole the warmth of the kisses → *steal, not stole
Don't get discouraged—your translation is still good. Regular smile If you have any questions about the corrections, feel free to ask them.
 

san79    Tue, 13/03/2018 - 06:30

Thanks a lot for your help Wink smile