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Ещё хочу (Eschyo hochu) (English translation)

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Proofreading requested
English translation

I Want Some More

The thirst is unbearable
This is just a sporting sense.
I am following you, like in movie
 
Without you I'm going down
Your taste, my current
The smoke to the ceiling
I want some more...
 
Let's think of nothing,
Except of our planet
We'll sink in unison
With our secret
And whatever happens,
We are under the same sky,
Erasing the prohibitions, you and I (2x)
 
Let's not think...
 
My rock is inside you
From A to Z, your own personal kind
We are filled to the brim, we're going mad,
I want one more sip...
 
But we're still dragging this out,
And our end is only tactile
I know all your spots,
You don't mind losing to me,
I will read between the lines,
Love is a hint, I want some more...
 
Let's think of nothing,
Except of our planet
We'll sink in unison
With our secret
And whatever happens,
We are under the same sky,
Erasing the prohibitions, you and I (3x)
Let's not think...
 
Please don't hesitate to correct me, especially if the translation language is your native language.
With Best Regards,
© Alexander Laskavtsev
Submitted by Alexander Laskavtsev on Mon, 18/06/2018 - 15:18
Added in reply to request by Bryan C.
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Ещё хочу (Eschyo hochu)

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Alexander Laskavtsev    Mon, 18/06/2018 - 15:23

Спасибо за такую щедрую оценку. Я еще просматриваю и исправляю перевод Regular smile

Igeethecat    Mon, 18/06/2018 - 16:02

точки - here it sounds like it should be 'spots', not 'points' - like G-spot

Sophia_    Mon, 18/06/2018 - 16:12

Как теперь инженеру жить,
Как использовать эти странности?
Я искал в тебе точку джи,
А нашел - регулятор тональности.(с)

Alexander Laskavtsev    Mon, 18/06/2018 - 16:50

Как дипломированный инженер - полностью солидарен Wink smile