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Desde un margen que existe... (English translation)

  • Artist: Roberto Juarroz
  • Song: Desde un margen que existe... 11 translations
  • Translations: English #1, #2, #3, French, German, Italian, Polish, Portuguese, Russian #1, #2, #3
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Spanish

Desde un margen que existe...

Desde un margen que existe
de un mundo que no existe
decir una palabra que existe
sobre algo que ni existe ni no existe.
 
Tal vez esa palabra y ese margen
puedan crear el mundo
que debió sostenerlos.
 
Submitted by GuernesGuernes on Thu, 06/06/2019 - 18:29
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The essence of existence

Versions: #1#2#3
From the periphery
of a world that exists and is yet unreal
say a word that exists
about something that neither exists nor is real.
 
Maybe that word has the latitude
to create the world
that could sustain them.
 
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Submitted by BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever on Sun, 20/10/2019 - 17:41
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Comments
BratBrat    Sun, 20/10/2019 - 17:59

Much better than запас мира...

BlackSea4everBlackSea4ever    Sun, 20/10/2019 - 18:06

Is much better still not good enough? Lol

AldefinaAldefina    Sun, 20/10/2019 - 18:04

A very good translation. I wouldn't have posted mine, but I saw it only when I posted my translation. Anyway, mine is very literal, as opposed to this one which sounds much better.

AchampnatorAchampnator    Sun, 20/10/2019 - 18:07
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I find that this translation is really good I probably would have translated it similarly

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