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Смешной Пистолет (Smeshnoi Pistolet) (English translation)

  • Artist: Korol' i Shut (Король и Шут)
  • Song: Смешной Пистолет (Smeshnoi Pistolet)
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Ridiculous gun

I have a style in pranks and pleasure,
Yes, I'm a shameless funny lad!
And this most charming flower-treasure
was picked by an experienced hand.
 
-Damn it, Elizabeth! Telling the truth,
Yes, I have confessed loving you,
not for being cheerfully wed,
but for the sake of a bet.
 
Once again my cruel prank
hitting the bull's-eye!
Tears and laughter always please my ear.
And, my lady, you should thank
me for your good time!
So let's dance to celebrate it, dear!
Cheer! Cheer! Cheer!
Hey, Innkeeper, pour us some more beer!
 
You are a prize of greatest value
But I don't need you anymore.
My pretty girl, I have to tell you,
I'm ghost for you and nothing more
 
I have dishonored you? Nonsense, non less!
Oh, get yourself, Elizabeth!
You've enjoyed things we have done!
Don't say today - you've liked none!
 
Once again my cruel prank
hitting the bull's-eye!
Tears and laughter always please my ear.
And, my lady, you should thank
me for your good time!
So let's dance to celebrate it, dear!
Cheer! Cheer! Cheer!
Hey, Innkeeper, pour us some more beer!
 
- Madam, to be honest,
getting out of such situations is routine for me.
Love is a game, and the one who loses -
is the one who takes it seriously, believe me.
 
Yes, silly bet is more precious to me
I'm sorry, dear, but c'est la vie
What is in your hand? Looks so fun.
Eh, woman's ridiculous gun!
 
Ha-ha-ha
Oh!
 
Thanks!
thanked 4 times
Submitted by LizzzardLizzzard on Thu, 13/08/2020 - 18:35
Author's comments:

I never thought that a heavy accent in my head would get in my way. ahaha T_T halp halp XD

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Смешной Пистолет (Smeshnoi Pistolet)

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George.GGeorge.G    Thu, 13/08/2020 - 20:07

Легко, игриво. Очень понравилось!

"Yes, I am shameless funny lad!">>>Yes, I'm a shameless funny lad?

"Yes, you are a prize that worth the trying
But I don't need you anymore.
My pretty girl, no needs in crying
I'm ghost for you and nothing more."

You might be prize of greatest value
But I don't need you anymore.
My pretty girl, I have to tell you,
I'm ghost for you and nothing more? (С жертвой артикля перед "prize")

LizzzardLizzzard    Thu, 13/08/2020 - 20:31

Спасибо огромное! ♥
первое уже поправила))

второе исправление мне тоже очень нравится и я его тоже возьму. тогда как раз уйдут слезы, которые я впихнула для рифмы.))

но на счет артиклей (мне всегда сложно оценить когда их жертва звучит норм, а когда там все критично)

может тогда:
You are а prize of greatest value ?

might звучит конечно сильнее. но эти их артикли ))

п.с. у меня еще у призрака потерян артикль(((
вот тоже не знаю насколько критично. беда

LizzzardLizzzard    Thu, 13/08/2020 - 20:44

For you, my girl, I have to tell you,
I'm just a ghost and nothing more

Попробовала впихнуть артикль призраку в новых реалиях.. наверное намудрила XD

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