Douze haïkus d'automne (Russian translation)

Hey, I hadn't noticed that you translated them. Basically, I would say that it's fine with me, with just a few remarks :

Иль я их тронул? > I didn't mean "я", rather "кто-то" (maybe God? who knows?)

Ниц : I didn't know that word, but anyway I didn't mean anything religious here, only that the sun is already low in October sky

в деревьях ветер рыщет, / все задевая : actually, I meant the wind is like a beggar or a person asking for a little money, and every tree gives a little (= some leaves)

вновь те же ль будут? > it's not too far from the original meaning, but basically it only means that those leaves have nearly lost everything that could be called a colour, they went greyish-brown, nearly the same coulour than the soil (while earlier they had beautiful hues)

The rest of it looks OK to me, thanks !