
Hey Kira,
here's the proofreading
как исхудала фигурочка means how thin you are ( lost weight too much)
яйцо диетическое. means a diet egg whatever that means
певцы заграничные means singers from abroad - no mention of hooligans or trouble in that stanza...
Выбирай любого - the meaning(implied) is choose any one of them ( foreign singers)
In the repeated last line there's no "from you" which gives it a different meaning. In the original, it's just that she does not want anything - period.
Feedback is always appreciated!