Tanz der Planeten - Mars (English translation)

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Tanz der Planeten - Mars

Ein ganzes Leben
Kämpfte ich mit Windmühlen
Statt Mehl zu mahlen
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© Lyrics: Vera Jahnke
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Dance of the Planets - Mars

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My whole life
I just did fight the windmills
Not ground flour.
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Submitted by IsraelWuIsraelWu on Mon, 20/09/2021 - 07:51
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Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    Mon, 20/09/2021 - 12:22

Thanks a lot for your good translation! 😃

IsraelWuIsraelWu    Mon, 20/09/2021 - 13:49

Thank you. It isn't literal, but I tried. I succeeded to keep the form and I think I didn't go too far afield with the meaning :-)

Vera JahnkeVera Jahnke    Mon, 20/09/2021 - 14:09

I am absolutely satisfied with your translation. You hit the spot! It's short and precise!

IsraelWuIsraelWu    Mon, 20/09/2021 - 14:15

Thanks, it seems we have to take all other combinations on faith :-)

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