Moon Incantation (Russian translation)

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Moon Incantation

Crescent high above
Evolving as you go
Raise what lies beneath
And let the darkness grow
 
Bend it to my will
Consume the sunlight's glow
Rise into the sky
And let the darkness grow
 
Let darkness grow
 
Submitted by altermetaxaltermetax on Mon, 27/01/2020 - 20:35
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Заклятье луны

Серп луны, свой лик
В небе преполняй.
Тьму из недр земли
Ты к небу подымай!.
 
Мне покорен будь,
Солнце погаси!
В небе воцарись -
И тьму везде врзасти,
 
Кромешную тьму!
 
Thanks!
Submitted by Алексей ЩуровАлексей Щуров on Wed, 24/11/2021 - 20:12
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Алексей ЩуровАлексей Щуров    Mon, 29/11/2021 - 20:51

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