While My Guitar Gently Weeps (Ukrainian translation)

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While My Guitar Gently Weeps

I look at you all see the love there that's sleeping
While my guitar gently weeps
I look at the floor and I see it need sweeping
Still my guitar gently weeps
 
I don't know why nobody told you
how to unfold your love
I don't know how someone controlled you
they bought and sold you
 
I look at the world and I notice it's turning
While my guitar gently weeps
With every mistake we must surely be learning
Still my guitar gently weeps
 
I don't know how you were diverted
you were perverted too
I don't know how you were inverted
no one alerted you
 
I look at you all see the love there that's sleeping
While my guitar gently weeps
I look at you all
Still my guitar gently weeps
 
Oh, oh, oh
oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
oh oh, oh oh, oh oh
Yeah yeah yeah yeah
yeah yeah yeah yeah
 
Submitted by jg94110jg94110 on Mon, 23/08/2010 - 14:35
Last edited by EnjovherEnjovher on Tue, 26/05/2020 - 06:13
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Ukrainian translationUkrainian (equirhythmic, metered, poetic, rhyming, singable)
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Якраз як в струн щемний хлип

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Я дивлюсь на вас, бачу, час любов ціпить
Якраз як в струн щемний хлип
Я дивлюсь на спід, бачу слід брудом ліпить
Допоки в струн щемний хлип
 
Чомусь ніхто тобі не мовив
Як розрости любов
Чомусь контроль тебе зумовив
Купив-продав рабом
 
Я дивлюсь на світ, значу, хід він свій стелить
Якраз як в струн щемний хлип
Помилками ми маєм вчитись напевно
Допоки в струн щемний хлип
 
Чомусь вдалося вас збити з суті
Бо й ви зіпсуті теж
Чомусь так вийшло вас завернути
Де були знаки, де ж?
 
(Дивлюсь з-за куліс, як ти граєш в виставі
Якраз як в струн щемний хлип
А я тут сиджу, тільки вік коротаю
Допоки в струн щемний хлип)
 
Я дивлюсь на вас, бачу, час любов ціпить
Якраз як в струн щемний хлип
Я дивлюсь на вас, на всіх вас
Допоки в струн щемний хлип
 
Thanks!
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Submitted by Olko KljufOlko Kljuf on Thu, 02/12/2021 - 13:42
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An early “demo” version of this song (included on the Beatles' album “Anthology Vol.3”) had a different set of lyrics:
I look from the wings at the play you are staging,
While my guitar gently weeps
As I’m sitting here, doing nothing but ageing,
Still, my guitar gently weeps

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Olko KljufOlko Kljuf    Thu, 02/12/2021 - 13:42

An early “demo” version of this song (included on the Beatles' album “Anthology Vol.3”) had a different set of lyrics:

I look from the wings at the play you are staging,
While my guitar gently weeps
As I’m sitting here, doing nothing but ageing,
Still, my guitar gently weeps

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