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New Ditty (Finnish translation)

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New Ditty

Denude yourself of prosy clothes, my pretty,
And show your poet-self in some new ditty!
 
Submitted by Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow on Mon, 04/07/2022 - 02:45
Finnish translationFinnish (equirhythmic, poetic, rhyming)
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Värssy uudenlainen

Riisu proosa yltäs, kaunokainen,
Ja paljasta värssy uudenlainen!
 
Thanks!
thanked 1 time
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).

Laplage.

Submitted by LaplageLaplage on Wed, 06/07/2022 - 18:40
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Dr_IgorDr_Igor    Wed, 06/07/2022 - 19:14

Hey Tero, don't you have too many syllables in the first line?

LaplageLaplage    Wed, 06/07/2022 - 19:29

Hi, I manage to count 10 syllables in the original as well as in the translation. Do you come up with something different ? Regards.

LaplageLaplage    Wed, 06/07/2022 - 19:35

After a second count, I found out that you're right. I have 11 syllables in the first line. Apologies.

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    Wed, 06/07/2022 - 19:43

No prob. Though I used to work for a Finnish company I have zero knowledge of the language. So my count was even bigger than 11 Wink smile

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