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Room without a View lyrics

  • Artist: Judy Nylon (Judith Anne Niland (Real Name), Judy Nylon and Crucial )
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Room without a View

Once by sundown this is my town
I'll be seeing you
Just to walk along the water to
A room without a view
 
Just the splashes of me match you
Rhythms all in time
For pleasure or by habit
Was it by design?
 
What is in the isolation
Someone always watching you
What's a night that has no future
A clandestine rendezvous
 
Leave me here among the clutter
In the smallest room
A naked bulb, a naked body
In a room without a view
 
In there for pleasure or by habit
In a room without a view
 
Thanks!
thanked 1 time
Submitted by Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow on Sun, 14/08/2022 - 20:45
The submitter of the song requested proofreading.
It means that the lyrics may not be accurate.
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uniquenessuniqueness    Sun, 14/08/2022 - 20:52

"As we walk along the water to // A room without a view" can be replaced with " Just as we walk along the water..."
"Water splashes only matching" can be replaced with " Just as we pleasing, only imagine "
"For pleasure or by habit // Was it by design" can be replaced with " Was it by desire? "

Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow    Sun, 14/08/2022 - 22:46

Thanks for your suggestions.
"Just as we pleasing, only imagine" and "desire" (instead of "design") unfortunately don't seem correct.

uniquenessuniqueness    Mon, 15/08/2022 - 07:32

I don't find them appropriate, but that sounds like this Kevin. You're welcome

Kevin RainbowKevin Rainbow    Mon, 15/08/2022 - 09:11

I changed the fifth and sixth line to -

"Just the splashes of me match you
Rhythms all in time"

It sounds more accurate now.

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