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Dido's lament (French translation)

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Dido's lament

Thy hand, Belinda... darkness shades me;
on thy bosom let me rest;
more I would, but Death invades me:
death is now a welcome guest!
 
When I am laid, am laid in earth, may my wrongs create
no trouble, no trouble in thy breast;
remember me, remember me, but ah! forget my fate.
Remember me, but ah! forget my fate.
 
Submitted by annabellannaannabellanna on 2015-10-17
Last edited by annabellannaannabellanna on 2017-12-22
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The last aria from the baroque opera"Dido and Aeneas" written by Purcell on text of Nahum Tate in 1689

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La lamentation de Didon.

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9. Ta main, Belinda...tout s'obscurcit;
7. Laiss' moi sur ton sein reposer,
9. Encore! Mais la mort m'envahit
7. Est devenue mon invitėe !
 
13. Dans ma tombe, tomb', que mes viles actions ne créent
9. Aucun trouble, trouble en ton sein
14. Souviens, souviens-toi de moi, mais non de mon destin
10 Souviens-toi de moi, non de mon destin.
 
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Submitted by Hubert ClolusHubert Clolus on 2019-07-28
Last edited by Hubert ClolusHubert Clolus on 2022-09-25
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Rahman BenRahman Ben    Sat, 24/09/2022 - 19:58

Les lamentations de Didon

Strophes → 4 vers → Hendécasyllabe suivie d’un Décasyllabe
En espérant que vous pourriez l’améliorer.

11 - Ta main, Belinda … la noirceur m’assombrit.
10 - Sur ton sein ou je me suis endormi,
11 - J’en voulais plus, mais la mort ma, envahit.
10 - La mort devient ma compagne, ainsi !

11 - Quand je serai mis en terre que mes torts
10 – Ne créent ni trouble, ni trouble en mon sein
11 - Pense, pense à moi mais oublie mon destin
10 - Souviens-toi de moi, mais oublie mon sort.

Hubert ClolusHubert Clolus    Sun, 25/09/2022 - 14:49


m'a envahie
Mise.

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