Sounds even better in French. Merci.
Do you think PSQ will translate it into Italian for me?
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Forgotten childhood → French translation
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Proofreading requested
Original lyrics
Forgotten childhood
Hair is wind-tangled
Pebbles hot under the feet
Sea waves rush to me
Old gnarly peach tree
On the swing, I fly up high
Wish to reach the sky
Huge square wood divan
Climbing roses midst grape vines
Sun drips on pages
A spoon of rose jam
Tea with cubes of frozen fruit
Forgotten childhood
Submitted by BlackSea4ever on 2020-11-29
Translation
Enfance oubliée
Cheveux dans le vent
Galets brûlants sous les pieds
La ruée des vagues
Vieux pêcher noueux
La balançoire m'emporte
Plus haut, vers le ciel
Divan de bois, livre,
Rosiers grimpant dans les vignes
Gouttes de soleil
La gelée de roses
Thé, cubes de fruits glacés
Enfance oubliée
poetic
equirhythmic
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Iremia | 3 years 2 months |
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BlackSea4ever | 3 years 2 months |
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Some people's dearest wish seems to be hated by the whole world. You won: we hate you. Be happy.
Submitted by Jadis on 2020-12-30
Author's comments:
J'ai dû sacrifier quelques mots pour garder le rythme des haïkus.
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Comments
That’s the price of believing 5-7-5 rule. Still, yours is also vivid, lol, and French.
Agh, I didn’t expect to force Viard.
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