Can someone proofread this Japanese > English translation I found online?

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If there are too many errors, feel free to post your own. Keep in mind this is not my work, I don't speak Japanese, this is simply something I found online, noticed that it wasn't posted here, and uploaded it, citing all credit for the website I found it on.