My transcription is ok? and help with some lines

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Hello, I wanted to know if my transcription is ok, and as you can see, there are some lines and words that are in black,
especially these words I'm not sure if it's okay. thanks for help Teeth smile
link of the song-> https://open.spotify.com/track/44yqJmnA3vqIAhD9XGes6r
She was walking down from the top of the mountain
All green and grey/great
Both life forces created
Some kind of excentric fearDrunkhards/drunken cars and drunken souls
All this kind of things shows at least/and least your way(…………………………blood….)
and nevertheless all the things wish are(?)and(?) will always make us, all of us, so very unhappy
 
Yeah you are
You are my messiah
She lifts me up, but you take the high
You really are, you are my messiah
Yeah you bloodless, soulless, heartless, loveless
 
I imagine in time be a person or friendSociopathic(……), your son(?)on whose shows created your views in golds(?)
but you know, time will always be a bitch
 

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Joined: 09.10.2015

My suggestions (but I'm not a native speaker so no 100% certainty):

Some kind of excentric fearDrunkhards/drunken cars and drunken souls => Some kind of an eccentric fear. Drunken hearts and drunken souls

All this kind of things which shows and leads your way. It's greed, it's blood, utter pain.

and nevertheless all the things wish are(?)and(?) will always make us, all of us, so very unhappy => but nevertheless all these things which are and will always make us, all of us, so very unhappy

She lifts me up, but you take the high => She lifts me up but you take me higher

I imagine in time be a person or friendSociopathic(……), your son(?)on whose shows created your views in golds(?) but you know, time will always be a bitch => I'm imagining time being a person or a friend, a sociopathic value, your son which would/should always create your views and goals but you know, time will always be a bitch

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My two euro cents:

(Spoken)
She was walking down from the top of the mountain
All green and gray
Both life forces created some kind of an excentric *fever*
Drunken *cars* and... drunken souls.
All these kind of things that... Which shows and leads your way.
Is it greed, is it blood, I don't know...pain? Ah, nevertheless...
All of these things which are...and will always, all of us, so very unhappy.

Yeah you are, your mother's son
She lifts me up
But you take me higher,
You really are your mamma's son
Yeah, you're bloodless, soulless,
Heartless, loveless

(Spoken)
I'm imagining time being a person or a friend,
a sociopathic value; your son...
which always creates your views and goals...
But, you know, time will always be *your* bitch.

Yeah you are, your mamma's son
She lifts me up
But you take me higher,
You really are your mamma's son
Yeah, you're bloodless, soulless,
Heartless

Loveless
Loveless

Yeah you are, your mamma's son
She lifts me up
But you take me higher,
You really are your mamma's son
Yeah, you're bloodless, soulless,
Heartless, loveless

I might of course be wrong in some parts, so if someone who is good at transcribing AND possibly a native speaker, feel free to correct these transcriptions.

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Joined: 05.10.2017

Thank you Martha and Pääsuke
I read both of your transcription and I combine them.
I still have doubts with GRAY, GREED and THE HIGH (I listen the Highhh...)

She was walking down from the top of the mountain
All green and **gray**
Both life forces created some kind of an eccentric fear
Drunken hearts and drunken souls
All this kind of things...which shows and leads your way.
It's ***greed***, it's blood, utter pain? but nevertheless
all these things which are...and will always make us, all of us, so very unhappy

Yeah you are
You are my messiah
She lifts me up, but you take ***the high***
You really are, you are my messiah
Yeah you bloodless, soulless, heartless, loveless

I'm imagining time being a person or a friend,
a sociopathic value; your son...
which should always creates your views and goals...
But, you know, time will always be your bitch.

Yeah you are, your my messiah
She lifts me up
But you take the high,
You really are your my messiah
Yeah, you're bloodless, soulless,
Heartless

Loveless
Loveless

Yeah you are, your my messiah
She lifts me up
But you take the high,
You really are your my messiah
Yeah, you're bloodless, soulless,
Heartless, loveless

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Joined: 21.06.2013

Off the topic, but @bakugirl , your username is really interesting. Did you know that Baku was the capital city of my country? Lol.

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haha no problem.
Yes I know, I knew it by Eurovision. Baku was the host I think...since that Eurovision I never forget Baku :D. I must admit that I didn't know there was a city with that name. But, originaly my nickname reffers of a manga named Bakuman, that I read years ago.

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bakugirl wrote:

haha no problem.
Yes I know, I knew it by Eurovision. Baku was the host I think...since that Eurovision I never forget Baku :D. I must admit that I didn't know there was a city with that name. But, originaly my nickname reffers of a manga named Bakuman, that I read years ago.

Haha, yeah Baku was the host city of Eurovision 2012 Teeth smile Light your fire! Lol :d
Yeah most of the people didn't even know where Azerbaijan was before :d

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bakugirl wrote:

Thank you Martha and Pääsuke
I read both of your transcription and I combine them.
I still have doubts with GRAY, GREED and THE HIGH (I listen the Highhh...)

She was walking down from the top of the mountain
All green and **gray**
Both life forces created some kind of an eccentric fear
Drunken hearts and drunken souls
All this kind of things...which shows and leads your way.
It's ***greed***, it's blood, utter pain? but nevertheless
all these things which are...and will always make us, all of us, so very unhappy

Yeah you are
You are my messiah
She lifts me up, but you take ***the high***
You really are, you are my messiah
Yeah you bloodless, soulless, heartless, loveless

I'm imagining time being a person or a friend,
a sociopathic value; your son...
which should always creates your views and goals...
But, you know, time will always be your bitch.

Yeah you are, your my messiah
She lifts me up
But you take the high,
You really are your my messiah
Yeah, you're bloodless, soulless,
Heartless

Loveless
Loveless

Yeah you are, your my messiah
She lifts me up
But you take the high,
You really are your my messiah
Yeah, you're bloodless, soulless,
Heartless, loveless

I going to finish with this transcription.
thanks to those who helped me Wink smile

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