Translation suggestions for Romanian->English song

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I'm not completely content with this translation. Post a suggestion if you spot anything.
https://lyricstranslate.com/en/dincolo-de-marte-further-mars.html

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Eu inteleg un pic limba romana, dar am facut aceea fara sa verific originalul, just based on what sounds most normal in colloquial English speech:

Further than Mars
[Stanza 1: Randi]
Supernatural
From head to toe there’s nothing ordinary about you
Your gaze captivates me (or: enthralls me)
And I feel a shock from head to toe
Where did you come from?
You're like a comet from infinity (or: You're like a comet out of infinity)
Your smile sticks to my heart
It's just like in a story

[Pre-Chorus: Randi]
And I don't know what drives me to want you every night
You rare beauty! (i.e., if he is addressing her as being a rare beauty)
(otherwise: You’re a rare beauty!)

[Chorus: Roxen]
You’ve got another kind of magic, you are something else
Tonight, I want you to take me to your planet
It's a love from far away
We’ll make love on Mars
You got a different kind energy, you are something else
Tonight I want you to take me to your planet
It's a love from far away
Take me further than Mars

[Stanza 2: Roxen]
You are, oh my God
Is this what everyone is like on your planet? (or: Is this what everyone on your planet is like?)
What a trip, what excitement
Your love is a symphony
There's no way you could be like this
I hadn't even dreamed that you could exist
If we were a constellation
We would be looked upon as a sensation

[Pre-Chorus: Roxen]
And I don't know what drives me to want you every night
You rare beauty! (Or: You’re a rare beauty!)

[Chorus: Roxen]
You’ve got another kind of magic, you are something else
Tonight, I want you to take me to your planet
It's a love from far away
We’ll make love on Mars
You got a different kind of energy, you are something else
Tonight, I want you to take me to your planet
It's a love from far away
Take me further than Mars

[Outro: Roxen]
You’ve got another kind of magic, you are something else
Tonight, I want you to take me to your planet
It's a love from far away