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LeraFa17 on 2023-01-28
WaterrailLeraFa17 on 2023-02-28| 1. | Hey Maude |
| 2. | Hold It In |
| 3. | Jumpstarted |
| 1. | a primera vista |
| 2. | amor a primera vista |
Waterrail
Tue, 28/02/2023 - 00:09
I've found a few mistakes:
- (5, 19) kissed goodnight, I think it should be "besamos las buenas noches"
- (9, 23, 36) Hey Maude: I would translate that as "Oye, Maude" because he's getting her attention not greeting her
- (18) I would just say "Corrí el riesgo"
MissAtomicLau
Tue, 28/02/2023 - 00:25
Hi, some more details:
Y luego nos besamos buenas noches ---> Y luego nos dimos un beso de buenas noches (Sounds more natural this way).
Borracho convencido de que esto es realmente ---> Borracho, convencido de que esto es real (No need to use 'realmente' here).
Me probaste el tonto ---> Demostraste que soy un tonto (Sounds more natural this way).
Te demostré que eras el más tonto ---> Te demostraré que soy el más tonto (He's talking about himself, not about Maude + future tense in 'demostraré').
There may be inaccuracies in the translation, because this is not a poem, if you notice inaccuracies, write in the comments. I'll fix it. Thank you very much)