Dance all nite lyrics

Yes, Jala, thanks for asking.
The punctuation is definitely much more correct as proposed by Alberto, both in the Italian and in the English parts.
And as for capitalization, it’s also correct in the English part.
But in Italian, generally, we don’t use uppercases at the beginning of each line, but only after the full stop, so that the grammatical sense appears clearer.
Only when they are scattered sentences without a grammatical construct, a capital letter is good at the beginning of each line.
It’s not an error, just a matter of style, and each language has its own style, of course.
Shall I correct it?