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Mary Nikolska - Like a hero

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Like a hero

All my best is in vain
I groan with despair
But my hope is again
like a hero
 
At the crossroads I'll stay
In this terrible place
with nothing to face
in the mirror
 
In a moment out of blue
A sunset in blood
cries as if is it true,
this poem
 
But I'm waiting again
for my pain to go away
I shall come then
to your home
 
Without questions or complaints
We will speak again
of our divine
and our loneliness
 
We shall find such words
And never be stopped
By the rising smoke
and by darkness
 
In the flame of hope
At this little home
We will never be alone
Oh my darling
 
Thanks!
thanked 8 times
Submitted by Marica NicolskaMarica Nicolska on Fri, 20/07/2018 - 06:58
Last edited by Marica NicolskaMarica Nicolska on Wed, 19/08/2020 - 16:29
Submitter's comments:

This is my first attempt of writing poetry in English. Please, write me, if something calls not good. Thank you, my friends, for your help!

 

Comments
Alexander LaskavtsevAlexander Laskavtsev    Tue, 24/07/2018 - 15:00

I'm sorry, what do you mean here:

We will speak again
of our devine

?

Also:
"We will be never alone" should be "We will never be alone"

Marica NicolskaMarica Nicolska    Tue, 24/07/2018 - 15:24

Разговор заведем
о судьбе - да, вдвоем...

Marica NicolskaMarica Nicolska    Tue, 24/07/2018 - 15:25

Жаль, что написала этот стих пару дней назад - Греция в огне

BratBrat    Thu, 13/09/2018 - 11:50

complains-> complaints Wink smile

Marica NicolskaMarica Nicolska    Fri, 23/11/2018 - 17:00

I grow with despair? I want to change it. It would be better I believe

Jelly CatJelly Cat    Wed, 19/08/2020 - 13:53

Could you break down this line in the 3rd stanza? I'm not pretty sure if I grabbed it right.

> cries as if is it true, this poem

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