A Minuet Of Mozart's (Russian translation)

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A Minuet Of Mozart's

Across the dimly lighted room
The violin drew wefts of sound,
Airily they wove and wound
And glimmered gold against the gloom.
 
I watched the music turn to light,
But at the pausing of the bow,
The web was broken and the glow
Was drowned within the wave of night.
 
Submitted by vevvevvevvev on Tue, 25/05/2021 - 06:27
Last edited by Valeriu RautValeriu Raut on Wed, 25/08/2021 - 06:11
Russian translationRussian (poetic, rhyming)
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Менуэт Моцарта

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По комнате, где тусклый свет
Альт звука продвигал утки,
Те ткали музыку, легки,
Сверкало злато в полутьме.
 
Я наблюдала пламень нот,
Но лишь смычок чуть замирал,
Свет гас, сеть порвана была,
В волнах её топила ночь.
 
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Submitted by vevvevvevvev on Tue, 25/05/2021 - 06:29
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Comments
vevvevvevvev    Tue, 25/05/2021 - 10:07

Не танцор, каюсь Regular smile

SpeLiAmSpeLiAm    Tue, 25/05/2021 - 10:09

Так это же в каком-то смысле и хорошо - ничто зато не мешает. Wink smile

vevvevvevvev    Tue, 25/05/2021 - 10:11

Тут может быть и наоборот - что-то слишком мешает Regular smile

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