Russia is waging a disgraceful war on Ukraine. Stand With Ukraine!

Не Париж (Ne Parizh) (Hebrew translation)

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Не Париж

Едва впадешь в дневные грезы,
Над суетою воспаришь -
А за окном уже морозы
И не Париж.
 
Submitted by Julia_ArkhitektorovaJulia_Arkhitektorova on Fri, 29/10/2021 - 15:41
Hebrew translationHebrew (poetic, rhyming)
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לא פריז

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אך רק אשקע בחלומות שבהקיץ
דואה אני מעל ההבלים
הנה בחלוני כבר כפור מציץ
פריז שם לא רואים
 
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Submitted by LenaPtLenaPt on Tue, 30/11/2021 - 09:55
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