Elli Kokkinou - Paraitoumai (Παραιτούμαι) (English translation)

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English translation

I quit

And here comes the time
to bring the upside down.
You are also a shadow
and the moon is at full.
 
You ask generally speaking, where I address to
And Ι answer to you in particular:
 
Τo your ingratitude
you blank heart
your secret life
which you live at night.
You have the right
not to talk to me
It will be used against you
Whatever excuse you make.
 
Whoever wants many things
it is rumored that he loses even the less.
The heart doesn't forget
whatever I saw with my own eyes.
I don't seek for revenge
However much I deserve it
Whenever I surplus I do not belong anywhere.
I quit.
 
Inside me there are voices
and in your look there is quiet
The sky casts
betrayal upon the speakers.
 
You ask generally speaking, where I address to
And Ι answer to you in particular:
 
Submitted by giwrgosp. on Sat, 10/06/2017 - 17:47
Added in reply to request by kazablue
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Paraitoumai (Παραιτούμαι)

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sora14    Fri, 16/06/2017 - 10:50

Source lyrics have been updated. You may want to review your translation.

giwrgosp.    Sun, 18/06/2017 - 07:50

Entirely changed, I'd say!