English
Пепел (Pepel) (English translation)
Ashes
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Igeethecat on Fri, 04/05/2018 - 06:36Igeethecat on Sun, 06/05/2018 - 20:55It means that he/she will be happy to receive corrections, suggestions etc about the translation.
If you are proficient in both languages of the language pair, you are welcome to leave your comments.
| 1. | Шелкопряд (Shelkopryad) |
| 2. | Формалин (Formalin) |
| 3. | Человек 33 черты (Chelovek 33 cherty) |
| 1. | One way or another |
BratIgeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 20:08
Thanks to both of you for your help
I’ve adopted most of your suggestions
If am still missing something, please let me know
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 20:43
Anyway, is it ok? Understandable? Readable? Хорошо, что в английском нет падежей и родов... могли бы ещё быть попроще с временами глаголов... ну ладно , nobody is perfect:)
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 19:31
It’s always клочья (plural) it’s like “осколками в бездну”, hard to translate
Would you say “I am an ash, you are an ash” in English?
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 18:22
Tёплый воздух уносит вверх - you think warmth won’t work? It’s not really about the air, more like a feeling
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 21:04
Ok, double up and article things - fixed
Ты пепел, я пепел - I just cannot comprehend it in English as ‘you are ashes l am ashes’
And the last one, you got the meaning, but where do you see a problem- в дорогах или в крематории?
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 21:22
I don’t know, it’s just me... maybe I am listening to too much reggaeton
Btw, there are stories, not paths, I think this is why I used ‘one way or another’
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 21:35
Final destination - do you mean “road to crematorium”?
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 21:54
I guess I better pretend to be a Santa Clause to find my way in:)
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 22:00
Везде Вы бывали, всё Вы знаете;)
Igeethecat
Sun, 06/05/2018 - 22:13
I am sorry, I just could not hold myself. It’s an old Russian joke, not appropriate and not funny , not at all
There are 2 sentences:
1.Пепел - это для них навсегда,->From now on they will be ashes, forever
2.Слишком рано выходит звезда
В обгоревшие клочья небес -> The star comes too early/Into the burnt tatters of the skies (tattered clouds coloured by the setting sun are meant)
BTW, you got the rest OK.