Thanks for you translation.
V1L1 I don't think "shall" is right in this context -- I couldn't or poem not to be found
For your consideration:
Таких, чтоб было всё толково -- and each one sounds so clever
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Мне не найти тебе стихи → English translation
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Proofreading requested
Original lyrics
Мне не найти тебе стихи
Мне не найти тебе стихи
Таких, чтоб в них звучало слово
Таких, чтоб было всё толково
И о тебе. Одни штрихи.
Но не заснуть и эти дни
В бессонной голове роятся.
Воспоминания хранятся,
Наружу просятся они.
И не вместить тебя в меня,
Меня в тебя и не рискую,
Лишь только в памяти рисую
Твои черты, любовь моя.
Submitted by Sophia_ on 2017-12-16
Translation
I shall not find a poem for you.
I shall not find a poem for you
Where words are ringing far and near
Where words are there, their meaning's clear
And about you. Just sketches, still.
I cannot sleep, and these fine days
In sleepless, tortured head are spinning.
My reminiscences in storage
Are eager to be let outside.
Not fitting you inside myself,
Myself in you, I cannot risk that.
Just in my memory I'm drawing
Your lovely features, my true love.
Thanks! ❤ | ||
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Submitted by Mity on 2019-08-17
Added in reply to request by Sophia_
Author's comments:
Lovely poem, short and sweet.
Second sentence corrected
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