San Martino del Carso* (French translation)

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San Martino del Carso*

Di queste case
non è rimasto
che qualche
brandello di muro
Di tanti
che mi corrispondevano
non è rimasto
neppure tanto
Ma nel mio cuore
nessuna croce manca
È il mio cuore
il paese più straziato
Submitted by Coopysnoopy on Thu, 26/01/2017 - 09:40
Last edited by Valeriu Raut on Tue, 10/07/2018 - 12:21
Submitter's comments:

* open air museum about WW 1

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French translation

St. Martin du Carso

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De ces maisons
n'est pas restée
que certains
lambeau de mur
De tant de
qui m'a correspondu
n'est pas restée
pas même si
Mais dans mon cœur
aucune croix n'est manquante
Mon cœur
le pays le plus mutilé
Submitted by doctorJoJo on Sun, 13/01/2019 - 00:09
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