Hola, Celal1
Algunas notas:
1. "levita" - I don't know the exact word to use, bue it refers to the uniform --> "frock/frock coat" (?)
2. "I joined the rows" - "filas" refers to the service/army.
3. "that mocked my life". Altough it is not there, I would say "my entire life" to make the verse a little longer (but no need).
4. "and told me the graceful" - Better, "and the graceful/vivacious/funny one told me"
5. "hurts me a foot" --> "my foot hurts"
6. "but if it is for another thing" I would say, "...for something else"
7. "although it is limping" --> "although I'm limping/even limping. I will go".
Feel free to move words around, when necessary, to get more clear meaning.
Hasta luego.
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