Старушка (Starushka) (Polish translation)

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Старушка

Недолго мучилась старушка
В высоковольтных проводах.
Ее обугленная тушка
На птичек наводила страх.
 
Submitted by Skirlet HutsenSkirlet Hutsen on Sat, 07/11/2020 - 20:47
Polish translationPolish (poetic)
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Staruszka

Niedługo męczyła się staruszka
W przewodach wysokiego napięcia.
Jej zwęglone truchło
Ptaki przerażało.
 
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Submitted by IsraelWuIsraelWu on Sat, 18/09/2021 - 11:12
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