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Swallow Flight (Hebrew translation)

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Swallow Flight

I love my hour of wind and light,
I love men's faces and their eyes,
I love my spirit's veering flight
Like swallows under evening skies.
Submitted by Valeriu RautValeriu Raut on Wed, 27/10/2021 - 08:54
Hebrew translationHebrew (poetic)
Align paragraphs

מעוף הסנונית

את השעה שלי של הרוח והאור אנוכי אוהבת,
את פני הגברים ואת עיניהם אנוכי אוהבת,
את מעוף רוחי המזגזג כמו סנונית
תחת שמי הערב אוהבת אנוכי.
thanked 1 time
This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Submitted by IsraelWuIsraelWu on Wed, 27/10/2021 - 13:53
The author of translation requested proofreading.
It means that he/she will be happy to receive corrections, suggestions etc about the translation.
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