Sweet Violets (Polish translation)

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Sweet Violets

You are brief and frail and blue-
Little sisters, I am, too.
You are Heaven's masterpieces-
Little loves, the likeness ceases.
 
Submitted by IremiaIremia on Fri, 15/10/2021 - 13:15
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Słodkie Fiołki

Wyście krótkotrwałe i łamliwe i niebieskie-
Mali braciszkowie, ja też taka jestem.
Wyście niebios arcydzieła-
Moji kochani, we mnie tego podobieństwa nie ma.
 
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Submitted by IsraelWuIsraelWu on Mon, 01/11/2021 - 10:18
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