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Телестих 4 (Telestih 4) (English translation)

  • Artist: Kalina (Калина)
  • Song: Телестих 4 (Telestih 4)
  • Translations: English #1
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Телестих 4

Вътре в мен чувам плаЧ
Пак това вътрешно детЕ
Се е събудило...по залеЗ
И говори със глас тъжеН
Рухна...въздушната кулА
 
Submitted by kalina_989kalina_989 on Wed, 29/06/2022 - 18:41
English translationEnglish (poetic)
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Telestich 4

Versions: #1#2
At sunset, my other halF
Cries with tears like a seA
Eh, the inner child is saD
For the destroyed air castlE
 
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Submitted by kalina_989kalina_989 on Wed, 29/06/2022 - 18:50
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A deviation from the source text to keep the original format.

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