Hi! I just saw this message ages later because of the other comments recently posted here.

OK, I'm not surprised that a song listing can't be pulled - I figured so, especially when a translation was already up - and in retrospect, I realize that the notion of wanting to remove someone's work, even if perceivedly inferior, was unthoughtful and impolite. I'm grateful that you replied to me so kindly!

I do post translations all the time to songs that have pre-existing versions to give my rendition or replace a very poor one, but in this case, I hadn't wanted to, because I had already deleted the translation I wrote. I wrote it in the editor on a whim, so it wasn't saved anywhere else, and I didn't want to have to redo it. I thought that having it pulled - which is what I did to my translation - would be better than having to redo it just because someone else did it. This line of thought was based on me thinking you only translated it because you saw it here with no translation on the site, but I realize that you may have also just known the band, and someone could've translated it at a later point in time regardless of its removal, so I understand that as well now.

I think you wrote this translation, right? If so, and if you still want to keep it up, I would be happy if you went through some of the errors you made, especially the chorus. The entire phrase "君に間違った事はなく、道を誤った事もなく、ありのまま何もない" is in relationship to 君, which means the whole chorus should roughly be something like: "I cry because I feel like I'm going to miss out on [a version of you that] never made mistakes, never went down the wrong paths [in life], and has nothing [burdening you], just as you are".

Of course, that's an extremely long and unwieldy phrase, and I recall really having to get clever with my translation to convey all of that information naturally as well as paraphrase to preserve the order of the lines (part of the reason why I didn't want to redo it). Your version isn't very elegant or delicate with nuance in the verses, either, which was upsetting to me (although understandable for this song), but for the chorus, what you did is not just a matter of clunkiness or sacrifice. I don't think it is possible to read the Japanese and actually interpret it to have the meaning of what you wrote in English. I feel like it is objectively mistranslated.

Again, sorry to have initially confronted you over this translation! I can't blame you for doing it, I don't own this song or anything. I would still like a nice translation available for it somewhere, though.
Keep up the work on your translations! :)