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月の悲哀 (Tsuki no Hiai) (English translation)

Proofreading requested

月の悲哀

涙は流せない ゆずれないこの道
嵐の中にも 求める扉があった
 
薔薇の花には 棘があるように
愛する人にも 傷をつける
 
*月色の光を探そう
(自由と・・・)
空回りしている
透明い時の中で
 
*Repeat
怪しげな美しさ 見てる二つの眼
 
Submitted by Laurence02Laurence02 on Wed, 28/10/2020 - 20:57
Submitter's comments:

Note: where "透明い" is written in the lyrics insert, "白い" is sung.
注:歌詞カードに「透明い」と書かれているところでは、「白い」が歌われています。

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The Sorrow of the Moon

My tears wouldn't stop flowing on that unyielding road:
even in the eye of the storm, there was the door that I searched for.
 
There seem to be thorns on the rose's flowers,
hurting even those who I love.
 
*Let's search for the moonlight,
(with freedom...)
we're spending time in vain,
as this white time passes.
 
*Repeat
The two eyes which look at that suspicious beauty.
 
Thanks!
Submitted by Laurence02Laurence02 on Wed, 28/10/2020 - 20:59
Author's comments:

This song is rather vague.

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