Virgin Suicide (English translation)

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Virgin Suicide

Submitted by tantomtuntantomtun on Sun, 25/07/2021 - 18:47
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Virgin Suicide

What finished changing,
Was your days and mine.
What I realized by myself,
Is that humans are sad because of love.
I will watch it like a movie someday,
Because I was kind of like an adult that day.
We will always be the same,
Since you acted like a kid who wanted love.
thanked 8 times

I am very new to translations, so this should only be considered a rough translation for what it is worth, as some of the translations might be awkward or even completely incorrect. Because of this, using it for any sort of official purpose is not recommended.

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Submitted by iRu_aRuiRu_aRu on Wed, 28/07/2021 - 02:32
Added in reply to request by tantomtuntantomtun
Last edited by iRu_aRuiRu_aRu on Sun, 22/08/2021 - 18:22
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