
"Probably as bad at this as others" - Don't say "bad", Deanna, you can write whatever you want, you are free like a fish in the ocean!
I like you second version best, although the fischerman leaves the pretty girl. Hm, doesn't matter, she can read your poems and have some absinthe. That will make her day! Thank you very much! 🐠
das vielleicht "tiefste deutsche Gedicht"