Chiarabella - A date


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The picture becomes warmer
Under your focused gaze and
Then I feel how my heart sinks
When I hear you call me
My nerves are tight as strings.
I need to start my journey
To you
Through the fast changing nights and days
To you
Over the ocean of my pain
To you
In the shadows I found a way
You didn’t let me go astray.
The colors become real
But my head still is spinning
You are holding my hand
While your eyes and mine speak
With tears filling my heart
I would like to stay here
With you
The only moment that we have
With you
Our feelings made us their slaves
With you
But we live where we think
May be we could change everything
The light has grown dim
And pouring down rain
Clouds cover the moon
It is time to say “Good-bye”
There's no one in the room.
The wind begins to howl and cry
ارسال‌شده توسط ChiarabellaChiarabella در تاریخ دوشنبه, 23/12/2019 - 17:32
آخرین ویرایش توسط ChiarabellaChiarabella در تاریخ چهارشنبه, 26/05/2021 - 14:53


FaryFary    جمعه, 27/12/2019 - 11:29

Is this related to the The Chronicles of Amber series? Is this a poem from it or...?

ChiarabellaChiarabella    جمعه, 27/12/2019 - 17:47

This is my poem. I wrote it several years ago after reading The Chronicles of Amber series.

FaryFary    جمعه, 27/12/2019 - 18:01

Oh I see. In that case, you could create an artist page for yourself and move this poem there. Other users have also added their own poetry that way, but it's up to you if you want to use your username or some other name.

FaryFary    شنبه, 28/12/2019 - 09:56

If you don't have any other poems you'd like to add right now, only mods and editors can add a new artist page without adding a new song/poem at the same time. I could add the page for you. Would you like it to be named "Chiarabella" or something else?

ChiarabellaChiarabella    شنبه, 28/12/2019 - 12:05

Thank you many times! Have a good New Year's eve!

FaryFary    شنبه, 28/12/2019 - 12:11

You're welcome, and you too!

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    سه‌شنبه, 18/05/2021 - 15:14

ОК, вызывали? Вот он я. Ответ на мой вопрос есть?

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    سه‌شنبه, 18/05/2021 - 15:19

Отлично.Тогда используйте знания
fixedly и slowly - наречия, а не прилагательные

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    سه‌شنبه, 18/05/2021 - 15:31

Мы русский текст разбираем или английский?

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    سه‌شنبه, 18/05/2021 - 15:36

ATA girl. I'll look for more mistakes a little later, have to take care of something...
Also here: 1.THE picture... 2.what's the intended meaning of "the portraits' form" - in Russian?

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    سه‌شنبه, 18/05/2021 - 16:00

Понял. Тогда английский текст не подходит. Предложу чего-нибудь.

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    سه‌شنبه, 18/05/2021 - 15:58

Кьяра ( будем считать, что это Ваше имя),
Общие замечания принимаете?

Dr_IgorDr_Igor    چهارشنبه, 19/05/2021 - 05:24

Хорошо. Хотите - перейдем в личку? Особого негатива у меня нету, но некоторые мои суждения
могут показаться "чересчур прямыми". Все на тему английского естественно. Хочу Вам предложить

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