
Para 1&5; Line 2: misspelling on Telephone.
Other than that, it looks great!
I wasn't sure were to use the simple present and were the present progressive, if someone has suggestions for improvement please tell.
Para 1&5; Line 2: misspelling on Telephone.
Other than that, it looks great!
One sits by the telephone waiting for a call.
Domina is usually translated as Dominatrix in English.