I made a lot of mistakes in this life
But none was big like this mistake
Disloyalty everywhere, every word is a disaster
Failed this world
What happened to us, and Allah has freed from him
How I did this to myself, and suspended
Everything is my fault I
I can not cry on myself
Why did you leave me to live
This lying suffused
Just leave me alone
Just leave me alone
Almost any line of your translation match with the origin of the song...
You should check up on your translation, then I'll review my vote. Regards.