Kolybel’naya medvedizy (Колыбельная медведицы) (अंग्रेज़ी में अनुवाद)

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Umka's Lullaby

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Snow is soft and clear,
Night is almost here,
Silly, why are you still awake?
See our sleepy neighbors,
Great big Polar bears.
Rock-a-bye, you too, my babe.
We are sailing nicely
On our ship-like iceberg
Through the sea so vast and so gray,
As our sleepy neighbors,
Great big Starry bears
Shine to ships so far away.
Avik TopchyanAvik Topchyan द्वारा सोम, 29/04/2019 - 01:50 को जमा किया गया
लेखक के कमेन्ट:

Tried to keep the rhythm... Corrections welcome.

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Kolybel’naya medvedizy (Колыбельная медведицы)

Phil AmbroPhil Ambro    सोम, 29/04/2019 - 19:13

Translation is good. You could footnote that "great big starry bears" is the "Big Dipper" in English. Other than that, it's good!

Avik TopchyanAvik Topchyan    गुरु, 02/05/2019 - 12:15

You're right. It's a literal translation from the text, which refers to both of these "bear" constellations (Ursa Major and Ursa Minor).
A bit difficult to draw the parallel, but I'll try. Thanks for your comment.