Портрет (Portret) (Angol translation)

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Портрет (Portret)

Даже минуты тянутся в дни
В воздухе замирает голос
Меж старых часов и стопок книг
Смотрит его нахмуренный образ
 
Портрет (4 x)
 
Ветки ольхи уперлись в окно
Запах духов, но никого нет
Шепот гардин под стуки часов
Лицо на стене излучает свет
 
Kűldve: HuntingWhales Szombat, 16/06/2018 - 20:48
Last edited by sandring on Hétfő, 18/06/2018 - 04:23
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Angol translation

Portrait

Even the minutes feel like days
The voice is freezing in the air
And between the old hours and piles of books
His frowning image keeps staring
 
Portrait (4 x)
 
The branches of alder rested against the window
The smell of perfume, but there's nobody here
Whispering curtains to the sound of wall clock
The face on the wall is shining out
 
Kűldve: HuntingWhales Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 15:33
Last edited by HuntingWhales on Hétfő, 18/06/2018 - 18:49
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petit élève    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:03

I quite like the sound of this.
There is an interesting revival of late 80's cold wave in Russia, with bands like Утро, Human tetris or Motorama.

замирает -> "is freezing/dying" ?

the sound of wall clock -> isn't a "a" missing there?

излучает свет -> maybe "radiates light" ?

HuntingWhales    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:13

Actually, Утро is the side project of the Motorama members Regular smile

"is freezing/dying" -> yes, that's right, my mistake

"a" missing -> well, I decided to drop it due to the abstract nature of what is happening

"radiates light" -> i think, "radiates" is more technical / scientific term

Sophia_    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:17
HuntingWhales wrote:

Actually, Утро is the side project of the Motorama members Regular smile

Круто, я не знала. Мне нравится Motorama, надо будет и Утро послушать Regular smile

petit élève    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:18

Ah ok, they sure sound like they could be brothers Regular smile

funny, I thought "emits" sounded more technical than "radiates" Regular smile

HuntingWhales    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:24

Anyway, I think you're right and both of those words are of technical usage, so I change it

Igeethecat    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:21

Излучать - same root as луч - освещать, озарять

petit élève    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:25

do you think "свет" could mean "the world" here?

Sophia_    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:27

Можно я тоже отвечу?
Я не думаю.
Здесь свет в значении "Light"

Igeethecat    Vasárnap, 17/06/2018 - 16:32

No, it’s more like ‘sparkle’, ‘illuminating’, not sure about the face on the wall, you know I’m not very good at direct translation.

sandring    Hétfő, 18/06/2018 - 04:31

Video changed. Now it's only the song in question. Излучать свет in this context means to be bright with emotions. They are talking about a sudden change in the portrait. So it should go "The face on the wall is shining out" Regular smile