Dans La Peau (Angol translation)

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Under my skin

My heart is bleeding, (so) I make it up.
My eyes are shining, then they flicker.
My heart is burning, is a sweet liquor.
Know myself by heart , it's my best trump.
 
Your heart is heavy, your heart's full of pain.
As if , (to)morrow, I was leaving again.
The girls who'll kill you, I'm not in their herd,
Even if caresses can't soothe all your words.
 
Oh dream and do not cry.
I am in love with you.
I understand what you' re saying.
You are in love with me.
 
Oh dream and do not cry.
I am in love with you.
I understand what you're saying.
You are in love with me.
 
And in this drawing , I love what's botchy.
None of these strokes seems unnecessary.
It's by following all its chalk-drawn curves
That I can guess all your doubts and your loves.
 
Madam can dance, Madam can sing.
Madam does what she wants if she gets excited.
Madam fears the stage and all its costuming.
She isn 't the same, you seem disappointed.
 
Oh dream and do not cry
I am in love with you
I understand what you're saying
You are in love with me
 
Oh dream and do not cry
I am in love with you
I understand what you're saying
You are in love with me
 
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Kűldve: Hubert ClolusHubert Clolus Szombat, 27/07/2019 - 06:19
Added in reply to request by Rita AkopyanRita Akopyan
Last edited by Hubert ClolusHubert Clolus on Szombat, 24/08/2019 - 03:32
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Rita AkopyanRita Akopyan    Vasárnap, 28/07/2019 - 23:44

Thank you for the spelling corrections, and for the Spanish - This should be fairly correct :
Oh...dream and do not cry
I am in love with you
I understand what you are saying
You are in love with me

Hubert ClolusHubert Clolus    Péntek, 02/08/2019 - 20:35

The fourth line runs as : Je me connais... Not : de me connaïtre. It' s what the singer sings,