Старушка (Starushka) (Angol translation)

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Старушка

Недолго мучилась старушка
В высоковольтных проводах.
Ее обугленная тушка
На птичек наводила страх.
 
Kűldve: Skirlet HutsenSkirlet Hutsen Szombat, 07/11/2020 - 20:47
Angol translationAngol (poetic)
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The old lady

The old lady, she didn’t suffer long time
In the high voltage wires.
Her charred carcass
Did frighten the birds.
 
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Kűldve: IsraelWuIsraelWu Szombat, 18/09/2021 - 11:11
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