The Tree of Song (Héber translation)

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The Tree of Song

I sang my songs for the rest,
For you I am still;
The tree of my song is bare
On its shining hill.
For you came like a lordly wind,
And the leaves were whirled
Far as forgotten things
Past the rim of the world.
The tree of my song stands bare
Against the blue —
I gave my songs to the rest,
Myself to you.
Kűldve: Oiseau MoucheOiseau Mouche Kedd, 31/03/2020 - 22:03
Héber translationHéber (poetic)
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עץ השירה

שרתי לאחרים שירים שלי,
עבורך אני שותקת;
ריק הוא עץ שירתי
על גבעתו הבוהקת.
כי כרוח הגעת שלטת,
ונישאו העלים
כמו דברים נשכחים הרחק
מעבר לקצה העולם.
ריק עומד עץ שירתי
ותכלת הנו הרקע —
נתתי לאחרים שירים שלי
את עצמי — לך.
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This is a poetic translation - deviations from the meaning of the original are present (extra words, extra or omitted information, substituted concepts).
Kűldve: IsraelWuIsraelWu Vasárnap, 28/11/2021 - 10:42
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