Don Juan
Ethan Feldman
Hétfő, 15/07/2019 - 23:35
Hola alma, lo creas o no, acabo de escuchar esta canción por primera vez. Iba a traducirlo, pero veo que ya lo hiciste. Gracias. Entonces me di cuenta de que solicitó revisión. Feliz hacerlo. English is my first language, so here are my mostly stylistic and interpretive corrections:
And the tender worlds you didn't say {and tender words left unsaid}
The caresses that will never be given {and caresses you shall not receive}
You don't have anything at all, everything is apparent { Nothing is for sure and what you get what you get}
Live now, try to give a bit of yourself to others { Live now, and try to give your all}
Más si tú vieses al hombre {What's more, if you had seen the man below your balconies, sleeping, wrapped in cardboard}
Al pie de los balcones
Que duerme envuelto entre cartones
noise of the rain falling {sound of the falling rain}
You think about what the other people think
God, following you, exists as you.
Live now, it's beautiful even though it never asked you.
Live now while seeking true love
(Don't you live tonight?) (Won't.....?)
(Don't you live now? (Won't...?
Because, because, because
The life is not life) this life is not Life)
This work has been done by Alma Barroca. In case you want to use it elsewhere, please ask for permission - if given, my name must be always mentioned as the author. If I find my works being reprinted without permission I will request for it to be removed.