Need help with song from The Killers-Mr. Brightside

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Iscritto dal: 23.05.2020
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I am learning Japanese and I have tried my best to have the translation match up with the syllables of the song. If anyone can help I would appreciate it. I make song covers and I would really like to know more about the structure of keeping the syllables intact while being able to sing in Japanese.

There are two versions that I tried working on with the help of a native Japanese speaker and a near fluent Japanese speaker. They both told me that since there are certain English colloquial phrases that it is a bit hard for them to get it perfect. They feel they have gotten it close enough and corrected my mistakes.

Sorry for the romaji

Ver.1
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ori kara detekiteru
konokan genki
te ni irerunara nani demo suru
kisu de hajimeta
nande hame ni nattano
tada no kisu ga
tada no kisu ga
netsuiteru
kanojo wa takushī wo yobu
yatsu wa tabako wo sutteru
yatsura wa beddo ni iku
onaka ga itai
atama no naka
mune ni sawatteiru
ima kanojo no doresu wo nuideru
boku ni tebanasareteru
tada mirenai koroshitete
seigyo shidashiteru
shitto zen hito ga umi ni natteru
iyarashī komorika tsūjite oyogu
aribai wo nodo ni tsumarukedo
tada gisei wo harau
unmei ga yondeiru
kenmeina me wo akeru
misuta buraitosaido dakara
kesshite

Ver 2
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ori kara detekita
watashi wa genki
te ni irerunara nani demo suru
hajimari wa kisu
nande kō natta
tada no kisu ga
tada no kisu ga
boku wa nemuri
kanojo wa takushī wo yobu
yatsu to tabako wo sutteru toki
yatsura wa beddo ni iku
onaka ga itamu
atama no naka
mune ni sawatteiru
doresu wo hazushiteiru
Hanashiteiru
koroshiteirumirarenai dake
jibun wo osaeru
shitto seijin mo umi ni naru
Kanjou wo oyodeiru
umaku ienai
shita koto wotsugunau
unmei ga yondeiru
takanome wo shite
Kara buraitosaido san
Omottenai

English
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Coming out of my cage
And I've been doing just fine
Gotta gotta be down
Because I want it all
It started out with a kiss
How did it end up like this?
It was only a kiss, it was only a kiss
Now I'm falling asleep
And she's calling a cab
While he's having a smoke
And she's taking a drag
Now they're going to bed
And my stomach is sick
And it's all in my head
But she's touching his chest now
He takes off her dress now
Let me go
And I just can't look, it's killing me
And taking control
Jealousy, turning saints into the sea
Swimming through sick lullabies
Choking on your alibis
But it's just the price I pay
Destiny is calling me
Open up my eager eyes
'Cause I'm Mr. Brightside
I never