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Un Dia En La Vida (A Day In The Life)

No hay nada nuevo que contar
un dia mas que paso triste así
tratando siempre de encontrar
algo real que no es
mi cielo es triste no es azul
 
Mi alma llora y mi ser
el tiempo pasa sin sentirlo más
la gente vive sin saber
que el mundo tiene que
tiene que vivir mucho mejor para poder seguir
 
Un dia en la vida que se va
y en mi boca sin palabras ya
y con la vista sin mirar
no hay nada nuevo que
que contar aquí, son vueltas nada más
 
Vamos tenemos que
que seguir luchando más
a este mundo vamos a cambiar
deja de soñar y se mas real
el poder del corazón
es muy fuerte ya veras
todos juntos vamos a intentar
cambiar el mundo y ser más feliz
 
Un dia en la vida que será
la solución de todo el mundo si
tenemos todos que intentar
seguir luchando así
tienes que vivir mucho mejor para poder seguir
son vueltas nada más
 
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A Day In The Life

There is nothing new to tell
another day that passes sadly like this
always trying to find
something that is not real
my sky is gray, not blue
 
My soul and my self crys
time passes by without me noticing it
the people live without knowing
that the world has to
has to live much better to have the will to go on
 
A day in the life that goes by
and without words in my mouth
and looking without seeing
there is nothing new to
to tell here, they are turns, nothing more
 
Come on, we have to
keep fighting more
let's change this world
stop dreaming and be more realistic
the power of the heart
you will see it is very strong
all together, let's try
to change the world and be more happy
 
A day in the life will be
a solution for everyone
together we have to try
to continue to fight like this
you have to live much better to have the will to go on
they are turns, nothing more
 
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MissAtomicLauMissAtomicLau
   Sab, 27/08/2022 - 00:39

Hey, Colin :)
Here's a detailed feedback with some suggestions/corrections:

my sky is sad not blue --- my sky is gray, not blue (Here you need to adapt the colors because "blue" in English means sad).
My soul and myself cry --- My soul and my self ("mi ser" isn't the same as "yo mismo").
the time passes by without feeling sorry anymore --- time passes by without me noticing it (It means he doesn't even notice the passing of time + definite article "the" is not needed).
and with the vision without looking --- and looking without seeing (You can see use this idiom here).
continue to fight more --- keep fighting more (It sounds more natural this way).
lets go to change this world --- let's change this world (No need to use "let's go" here).
stop dreaming and be more real --- stop dreaming and be more realistic (Real in this case means "realistic").
lets go to try to change the world --- let's try to change the world (No need to use "let's go" here).
A day in the life it will be --- A day in the life will be ("A day" is the subject so no need to use "it").
the solution for everyone, yeah --- a solution for everyone (indefinite article sounds more natural, I guess).

MissAtomicLauMissAtomicLau
   Sab, 27/08/2022 - 01:03

I'm glad that my corrections are useful to you. Keep up the good work! :D