Hello gak 2112

Thank you for the translation I didn't see before. I was waiting this one from someone else and it seems this person didn't do that.

I would like to make you some suggestions :

To translate these verses :
"Hacia tu cuerpo que huele you wrote : To your body whose scent
A una florcita del pago" Is like a dainty flower from the town I think "Is" it's not necessary

Just put : To your body whose scent....like a dainty flower from the town

Also for these ones :
" Que entre los montes florece That blooms among the hills
A una florcita del pago" You wrote : Is like a dainty flower from the town I think "Is" is not necessary

And it will be : That blooms among the hills ...like a dainty flower from the town

"mi pañuelo" "pañuelo" = "handkerchief"

Thank you